In(significant)
A single beautiful
drop.
Almost too small for the naked eye.
Unnoticed
It falls making only
small waves at first
touching a nearby toad
but then
growing bigger
and wider
spreads to stroke
the farthest tip of the pond.
It lasted for only a moment-
A mere second
lost
within years of time.
And yet it echoed, reverberated across a universe.
Just a drop.
Just a pond.
Just a drop in the bucket.
...maybe not?
Ok guys this needs help. Any suggestions?
I think it is better than your first version.
ReplyDeleteI really like it! I also love your title- it's very creative! :)
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